The Other Side
“I like writing class because I can write anything I want.” In each of my ELS classes a student writes a sentence on the board and the rest of the students help that child with the editing. The sentence above is one we came across yesterday. To me, it captures the life force of Genre Practice. In Genre Practice, students learn to explore their writing. Before Genre Practice, ELLs were asked to produce a specific genre, revise, edit and publish with the pace of the class. Now, the students are able to find their purpose, choose a suitable genre, and just write. They share, get feedback, revise, edit and make their writing public at their own pace. Because Genre Practice allows for children to explore deep meaningful topics in a self-determined time frame, students write about things they rarely speak of. Not a month goes by where I have to flip to the front page of a piece I’m reading to make sure the name I see is correct, surprised by the contradiction of the persona on the page to the student I know. I’ll examine the name again carefully and say, “Really? Tao wrote this? But he’s so vibrant and happy all the time? How does he disguise his angst?” I’ll rediscover this child through his writing and get a glimpse at his life outside of my classroom. Surprisingly, before Genre Practice children did not really change me as a person. I would read about fifty persuasive essays on bullying, best friends, or recycling, shrug my shoulders and say, “Uh? That was pretty good--an introduction, middle, and a sufficient ending…” These days their closed notebooks are like gateways into their existence and when I finish exploring them, I come out a little changed by what they’ve shown me. We all change when we interact socially, but rarely, until now, have my students changed me. I see the world in their eyes and experience for a moment their struggles and turbulence into adulthood. And as a teacher, when I’m about to lose my patience, when I’m about to give up, and when all the teaching has been sucked out of me, their voices reach me. Their pleas for attention make me the start of an audience they’ve been hungry for all their academic lives. I read, I listen, and I give them feedback. Most of the time it’s not about their topic sentence, or their verb-tense agreement. It’s about life and how hard it is sometimes. My students and I talk about parents, human relationships, and how the world is in need of more love and understanding. It reminds me of my position as their teacher, sister, and many times a friend. Recently a child I’ll call Tao wrote a piece in which he describes his father—a man who likes to eat a lot and drinks a lot of beer, who isn’t able to read the mail he gets in the mail and has to enlist Tao to help him; who gambles a lot. Tao tries to reason with his father, and the effort invariably deteriorates into an argument in which Tao is unfairly disciplined. Reading Tao’s piece made me realize that being an adolescent is damn hard. An adult trapped inside a child’s body just itching to get out. And until they are able to break free from their skin, these students penetrate their existing worlds through their child eyes and put themselves out onto paper for others to see—to see them differently, not as a child but as a person with reason and wants. With their frustration and conflicted identity they begin to find themselves through words. They yell with conclusions, cry through their main ideas, and offer supporting details with all their memories. In the beginning of the year, Tao wrote about the library. Yesterday he wrote about a father who drinks and gambles too much after losing his job. What will he write tomorrow? Part of the thrill of teaching is my anticipation.
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Write it out
Thank you for sharing! I think it's important to provide this safe outlet for students to express themselves. I am a preschool teacher and preschoolers often have difficulty communicating much like ELLs. When they are feeling sad and missing their parents, I have them 'write' about it. After drawing their picture they always feel better. It's fun connecting with students in this way!
Crossing Boundaries
Genre Practice really gives students a chance to get involved in the writing process, like no other program I have seen. I have been reading a lot about Genre Practice, and learning about it from my NYU classes. I found myself giving my fourth grade students more free writing time, and giving them the responsibility to make their own choices. I was a little skeptical at first; worried about those children I figured would be goofing off if given the freedom to do so. But instead, I have seen those same children producing pieces that I never thought would come from them. Students are crossing boundaries and experimenting with different genres. I have seen students create amazing comic books, and short stories, as well as children’s books and poems. They get inspired by each other when they see something new during conferences or the whole group share. I have one particular child who is usually very quiet and reserved, and during this social writing time, he is the one many students run to for peer conferences. Not only does he get the opportunity to share his writing/editing skills, but he is also gaining acceptance from the other students, and I can see a difference in his self confidence. I love that all students, despite ability, are socially involved in the writing process, and can learn from eachother!
Powerpoint
Hi Jaela,
Dr. McCallister and Sabina showed us the Powerpoint you used at NCTE. I wanted to send along my own "Bravo!" to you. Combining theory and practical application, you presented a compelling argument for how and WHY Unison Reading works with your ELL students. I'm sure the conference attendees were are impressed as we were in class!
Congratulations!
Kim
Freedom of Expression
This account is so powerful! By giving the student freedom to write anything; he was able to express something that is obviously extremely sensitive in nature. The student was able to feel comfortable to share feelings about a situation that he probably wouldn't have in a more traditional writing situation. The writing piece not only does amazing things for the student by allowing his free expression, but also teaches the teacher about the complicated lives of these children.
The Best Side
I can completely understand where you are coming from. Last year I had my high school juniors write about themselves, and also in the voice of someone who has influenced their lives, about a topic or theme that was of interest to them. (This was modeled after the book The Color of Water). I was amazed with the writing I received; one student wrote about how her father's deportation affected her family, another wrote how the most influencial person in her life, the person who helped her the most, was her math teacher, and yet another wrote about the perils of living in a shelter for victims of domestic abuse. Topic sentences and organization suddenly didn't seem so important. The courage my students need to summon just to come to school everyday sometimes overwhelms me. And like you, when I am ready to write them all off, when I'm yelling at them to quiet down, when I am frustrated and at my wits end, I remember these stories and remember why I became a teacher again. Without their writing, I couldn't possibly love them like I do.
powerful account!
Your account is very powerful! Having observed Genre Practice in action at P.S. 126, and learning about it in my grad classes, I have discovered the immense power that such an approach to instruction holds. What amazes me even more, though, and something that you really drive home in your post, is the incredible effect it can have on English language learners. In my experience of being in schools, I have never seen an approach that includes English language learners. Those students are always either pulled out to a "special" classroom, or they are segregated within the actual classroom, with an ESL teacher in their constant presence. Genre Practice makes these children feel like they are an integral part of the classroom (which they are!), does not segregate anybody, and most importantly ensures the learning and success of all of these students. It sounds magical, but when observing this approach in the classroom one can see that it truly works, and the testing results support the practice as well. Thank you for your inspiring account!
Pieces Of Their Lives
This piece about Tao really touched me. This new approach to teaching writing really seems to get children to truly express themselves and show their audience bits and pieces of their lives. I went to a Genre Practice meeting last Friday and witnessed other stories like Tao. Kids with tough lives that are hesitant to share themselves in their writing, but eventually feel safe enough to do so. I think this new practice helps foster this feeling of safety that allows children to express themselves and share intimate parts of their lives. Thank you!
Colleen Barnett
I love this!
I love this because I think this could also be a door on how to handle behavioral disruptions. Students always want to share stories and often they are told that they can share later or that they are getting off topic and they need to stay focused. By allowing the students freedom of topic choice, we can direct them to share their stories and to use their voice in their writing. This will motivate students to write and it will prevent this "off topic" conversation. All of a sudden, this child's experiences and stories becomes the focus.
Sometimes we categorize our students but we don't take the circumstances of their lives into consideration. By opening up the floor for them to share through their writing we can learn more about them, what they are going through, what they are thinking, and just who they are as people.
behavioral disruptions
I think in general behavioral disruptions happen because students don't want to be doing what they are doing. When this is the case then there may not be many because of the philosophy of Genre Practice. However, they still will occur and this does provide a good culture for conversations about it.
I student taught for 2 years and this is now my second year as an assistant teacher as I finish up grad school. It scares me how little I knew some of my kids and how well I knew others. Because Genre Practice was/is not the literacy approach being used where I am and where I have been, I could only peek into my students lives through conversations - usually in the context of reading or writing, actually. I feel like knowing them should be so much more central to teaching - don't you think we should actually know who our students are after spending an entire year with them? I can't wait to have my own classroom and hopefully employ GP, administration allowing.
Former ELL Student
As I was reading your story, I was constantly thinking about my own ELL experience. I was taken out of class, with other ELL students, and we'd work alongside a teacher in her office. Initially, I didn't really understand the purpose of this. However, I began to understand VERY quickly and began to dread the visits. The visits were mundane and I always felt like the spotlight was on me. It felt uncomfortable to always "get" was I was supposed to learn in a short period of time. However, after listening to the presentation last week and reading this article, I am intrigued by Genre Practice's approach for ELL students. It alleviates the burden of always "getting" and being able to produce immediately. I wish that while I was in ELL, I had this. I hope to learn in depth more about Genre Practice's approach as the year continues.
Thank you.
Bharti Vural
Writing Choices
I found your reading of Tao's piece so profound. I think that children have so much to say but are often not given a chance to share it enough because we as teachers, tell them what to do and how to do it. We want to give all the benefits of education and teaching has to offer but we don't give them enough opportunities to share and tell us what they want to tell us or teach us. Adolescents have so much more they need to let out and writing is an incredible medium for them to express themselves. What I was surprised about even more is that this is coming from an ESL student.
I also need to let my students' voices shine through more often and not just write about simple everyday occurrences. I want to hear their thoughts, their feelings, their stories and their lives through their writer's notebook. This will give me a new idea to introduce their writer's notebooks this week.
Writing what you want....
I had never realized how lucky I was to be in a school system that tried many of the techniques described in this approach to literacy long before there was a cohesive approach and support system to this style of literacy education. I had always assumed all students were given the benefit of choosing their own writing genres - I was always encouraged to find the genre that best suited what I felt like writing, and when I came to education from the other side - now as a graduate student in childhood ed / childhood special ed., I realized how little choice children are often given in their education, and how lucky I truly was. Children come to learning excited, and by allowing them to have choice about how they express themselves, we are nurturing that excitement. Thank you for your post sharing your excitement about learning about your students from the other side of education - I am so excited to start seeing students from this angle as well.
Genre practice
I am currently an undergrad studying early childhood and special education, so I don't have much experience yet when it comes to literacy instruction. This approach, however, really inspired me! I have never heard of the genre approach before, but it is definitely something that sounds both exciting and rewarding (both for the students and the teachers). I agree that it must be so much more meaningful for the students to be able to write and read about the things that they are really interested in. Students (especially those who are entering their teenage years) are going through so much and having this creative outlet is amazing. It's wonderful that you're getting to see your students in a new light that you wouldn't have been able to see had you just told every student to write about the same topic. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story.
I am currently a Grad student
I am currently a Grad student learning all about Genre Practice. It is really exciting to hear a first hand experience of how it changed you as a teacher. As I read through your blog, I could see myself reading lots of journals from my students and thinking that they were pretty good, but they didn't give me any insight to their personal lives. I am really looking forward to learning more about this new way of teaching writing and I can't wait to put it in practice!
Thanks!
You have made good circumstances.
Dear Eujin Jaela Kim,
Thank you for sharing your thought. It was good to heat that how Genre Practice has worked for you. I agree with you that children can express their feeling and thoughts by writing. I think that because you have made your class circumstances very safe and comfortable for children, they have been able to write whatever they have in their mind. I also think that it is really important to keep paying attention to children’s situation and understand what the children are thinking, worry about, happy, etc so that children can receive appropriate supports from adults such as teachers, parents, and people in a community-.
Lives outside of school
I love how you claim to rediscover a child through there writing. It is so true that a lot of the time children are able to express themselves in artistic ways that would never be able to express themselves through speaking and actions. It is fascinating that through their writing you are able to learn about your student’s lives. It is so important for a teacher to really understand where a student comes from and what happens between the hours that he lives school and comes back the next day. I understand it can be a struggle to get this information out of a child (particularly one who is struggling with language.) It is great that your students are comfortable enough with you to divulge their secrets in their writing.
what is important
I love to hear that Genre Practice has affected you so much. From the stories I have heard so far it seems that this new method of teaching/learning has had such a deep impact on both the students and the teachers.
Over the past couple of weeks I have read so many texts on teaching and learning and one of the most common threads throughout is the idea of metacognition. Your blog explains how the students are exploring the deep and meaningful topics, which are allowing them to be more self-determined. I feel like that is so important for students to have passion and interest in what they are learning. It seems that when they really “think about thinking” the students learn so much more! To build on the idea of writing what is important to them, writing about what is bothering them is such a great way of dealing with emotions. Like you explained, you find out so much about the students that you might have never guessed! They are allowing you into their lives, which is so great!!
Ample Benefits
Acting on students' writing
Building Meaningful Relationships
I too hope that I will be able to concent with my students. I want to get to know them so that I can support them in the right ways, I want to nurture their individual personalities and help them find who they are. As you've demonstrated, writing is a wonderful way to get to know your students and get a window into their life to better understand their culture, background, and their perception of the world. Reading your blog makes me want to experience the thrill of getting to know my future students in the same kind of way.
Eye Opener
Genre Practice seems to be a great tool to allow students to write without limitations. By not narrowing their writing to one topic, each student can dig deep into their lives and emotions and write whatever they want. A topic can sometimes limit a student's potential, had "Tao" been given a topic he might have never found an outlet to express what was going on in his life. Writing is an amazing form of therapy that can be helpful to students of any age. By introducing Genre Practice in the classroom students can grow in their writing and learn about the comfort writing has to offer of starting at a young age.
After doing the readings for my class this past week, I truly grasped the meaning of Genre Practice and cannot wait to share it with my fellow teachers. Keep us posted with more great stories!
so touching!
I just wanted to say that your blog is so touching and inspirational to me as a future teacher. You get to know your kids on a deeper level than anyone else has before and I find this amazing! I feel like the deeper of a connection you have with your students the more comfortable they will feel and thus share more. You are able to be a friend, a teacher and a mentor to your children! I am so impressed by your work.
Thank you!